When They Find Me
by Carter Wilson
Carter Wilson's 11th novel, When They Find Me, is a super-charged thriller about family ties, the legacy of trauma, and the tension between morality and survival. The story opens with an immediate adrenaline hit: "The old man says this is where our target is hiding. Somewhere in this little town. Expanse, Colorado." A young woman named Riven has just arrived in the cold and snow, traveling in a beat-up old RV with Boone, her brother, and their father, who calls himself Coyote. Boone and Coyote have both killed before, but their task in Expanse is to set up Riven's first kill. The target is the man Coyote maintains ruined their lives, years ago, when they lived in Idaho--"Back when we were domesticated. Fed on routines. Sleeping in real beds. No blood on our hands, no need for constant vigilance."
Also in Expanse, Annie Wolfe and her 12-year-old daughter, Coral, live away from mainstream society, offline and in hiding. They keep go-bags and weapons at the ready. They've equipped their home with a secret underground bunker. They have Harley, "the least ass-kicking dog" Annie has ever known, but she's good at alerting. Annie fears those who may be hunting them from a past life.
On December 23, as a potentially record-breaking snowstorm descends, Riven enters what she believes to be the house of her intended target. Instead, she finds Annie. This random accident--a simple mistaken address--sets off a chain of events that will change their lives forever.
The odds of these two armed parties stumbling upon each other may seem unlikely, but Expanse is a special place. "No one in this town discusses real names," and everyone seems to be hiding from something. Riven's intended victim had hoped to outrun the past that brings Coyote to Colorado. Annie, his neighbor, is on the run from something else: her own old trauma, the loss of her husband, and irrevocable damage to herself and to Coral.
After their initial confrontation, Riven and Annie are joined by Coyote and Boone in Annie's home, and they settle into their closed, snowbound environment. The three home invaders stand opposed to Annie and her dog, Harley; Coral is hidden away, hopefully in safety. Hours pass. Weapons are aimed, questions asked. The strain increases steadily as both physical and psychological threats multiply. Coyote came for revenge but insists his "pack" stay and seek a twisted "truth." Truth is a shifting target, however, for these men and women variously hunted or hunting.
Wilson's two narrators are flawed but sympathetic, with redemption seeming to hover just over the horizon. Riven in particular seems poised on the edge of a major change: "And here I remain, the one with all the power. The power to choose. The power to kill. The choice of being an animal or human." This will-she-or-won't-she charge contributes to the general unease.
Alternating chapters are told from the two women's first-person perspectives and move between the present setting--December in Expanse--and earlier times. In those flashbacks, readers slowly put together the past ordeals of the present-day antagonists. Annie, under a previous name, was married and lived in Miami. After the events leading to her husband's murder, she barely escaped with Coral to make a new life. "All women have my kind of fury," she posits. "All that's needed is the trigger to unleash it."
Riven, like Coral, witnessed terrible things as a child. Through her eyes, readers watch Coyote's mental health deteriorate. He commands his children to stop calling him father. He calls his family a pack, says they're on migration, demands they live by his version of an animal code: survival without sentiment. (As an Easter egg for returning fans, Coyote has named himself after a character in Wilson's third novel, Revelation.) Coyote is entirely lost in his fantasies, but Riven remains ambivalent, closely watching her beloved brother Boone, wondering if there is any shred left of "the kid who used to sneak me extra food, who still stands a little closer to me when the old man's voice sharpens. He's straddling some line I can't pull him off of. Half in the dark, half reaching for the light."
The circumscribed setting in a secluded, snowed-in, modest home, and the expansive interior worlds of the various parties, offer a remarkable contrast. Despite spanning only a handful of hours in the present, tightly defined space, When They Find Me journeys to past timelines, memories and fantasies without sacrificing its fast pace. Riven grapples with taking agency in her own life, questioning what she remembers and who she wants to emulate. Annie's past losses and old enemies remain ever-present for her, as she worries for Coral and avoids the ghosts she's not ready to face. This chilling novel of suspense is accompanied by occasional pencil-shaded sketches, illustrating scenes. Each holds a hidden element that contributes to the immersive effect and sense of mystery. Taut pressure, high stakes, and compelling characters combine in this unnerving thriller from an experienced writer. --Julia Kastner








